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Postby Evan » Tue Mar 26, 2013 6:49 pm

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Subject title: digital landscape painting

another landscape painting I did looking at improving technique
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Postby marvel57 » Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:34 pm

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Evan you got a nice background!Mebbe developed it with sharper objects?

 

Postby Evan » Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:50 pm

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do you mean adding some mountains in the background or detailing up the shoreline? kinda at a blank spot with ideas lately.

 

Postby perkexpert » Wed Mar 27, 2013 8:33 pm

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Nice start...but you can surely do something more with it :)
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Postby WhosNext » Thu Mar 28, 2013 10:58 am

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For you me you need to add some more details to the piece, more definition as to what is what. The viewer is doing a lot of the imagining/creating/interpreting at the moment, I would start to address this by adding brake lines where water meets land, texture for the water etc. I believe this is what Marvel57 means when he says "Sharper Objects". Also have somewhere for the viewer to rest their eye, I think you have attempted this with a figure in towards the bottom right, but its a little hidden at the moment, Try bring this more into the foreground.

Just my initial thoughts :-)

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