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Postby Maiy » Mon Mar 25, 2013 3:01 pm

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Subject title: Critique please?

Hello everyone, I'm new here, and I'd like to have some critique on my work to get better :) Thanks!

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Postby Evan » Tue Mar 26, 2013 9:35 pm

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vary good work on your paintings. however the value painting at the top seems like it could use some work im no expert on value but it seems to me that the subject does not stand out enough from the background. keep up the good work though

 

Postby flamelon » Tue Mar 26, 2013 10:02 pm

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I pointed out some of the things that stood out to me so I hope this helps!
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main critique
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actual changes

 

Postby flamelon » Tue Mar 26, 2013 10:05 pm

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I don't really know too much about horse anatomy so I can't help too much with the other ones, but the colors are amazing and I really like your style of painting especially on the last picture :) .

 

Postby Maiy » Thu Apr 11, 2013 1:36 pm

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Thanks a lot for the help! trying to get this fixed in my next pictures! :)

 

Postby Aangkat » Thu Apr 11, 2013 3:19 pm

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About your painting.
Maybe this is just a pleasing thing.
But if you are doing some part very detailed and some very rough.

It is very distracting to the viewers. Everything need to be in the same level.
Even the rough paintings are beautiful :D
But when you mix it, it just makes it confusing ^_^
Otherwise the color and composition looks really GOOD !
Keep it up ^_^

 

Postby Maiy » Fri Apr 12, 2013 11:07 pm

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Yes, that's sth. I always do.. I'm like: "oh my god, I finished the figure, it looks kinda cool, I wanna share it!
But shit, I can't upload it without a Background, it would look stupid, lets just get one as fast as I can xD

I know what you mean, thank you for your critique! I will be working in this! ;)


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