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Postby epilepticrainbow » Sun Mar 24, 2013 1:15 am

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Subject title: Cool Dragon

What should i have done? what did i do good? should i put it in photo shop? this was just to pass the time and i ended up really liking it so then i thought well, i should get some opinions :)
dragon.jpg

 

Postby alnoth » Sun Mar 24, 2013 3:22 pm

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so far it looks nice, as far as the pose goes, i would try to tilt its head to one of the sides - its always more interesting to look at (aka cooler) then the simple full profile - so either show a bit of the under-jaw or a bit of the forehead and the top of the nozzle, depending which way the head tilts. or maybe even have it look more towards the camera - with one of the legs lifted it would work out very well to have the dragon rendered halfway as the dragon makes a turn.

 

Postby marvel57 » Sun Mar 24, 2013 10:27 pm

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Epil - kinda cool. Do you have other drwgs?If so post them up! :ugeek:


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