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Postby tunaa » Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:09 am

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Subject title: Would love some feedback (WIP)

soo this is my guanltlet type weapon thing.

i would to see what you guys think of it .
i still need to do some more work to it (eg. make it look like metal/bronze)
Gualtlet 3d.jpg

 

Postby Aangkat » Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:41 am

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I think you dont have that much occlusion Ambient on your drawing.

It's a shadow type you get when thing are really close to each other.
THere aren't that many in your robot hand :D

 

Postby Dream » Fri Mar 01, 2013 1:05 pm

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Also, lights and values seem to get more defined and contrasted when it comes to metal (specially polished) textures. Although i am not entirely sure of that.
What is nature, but a miserable little pile of forms!?

"This is the truth: when you sacrifice your life, you must make fullest use of your weaponry. It is false not to do so, and to die with a weapon yet undrawn."

 

Postby marvel57 » Fri Mar 01, 2013 7:59 pm

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The top of the g auntlet looks like console in a car where the stick-shift is, keep posting, maybe hit it w/ some black ink lines :ugeek:


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