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Postby Oakenheart » Tue Feb 26, 2013 10:29 pm

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Subject title: clothes, bad posture and wonky hands

Hello Forum :>
I really wanna finish this piece but every time I go and try painting his shorts, it comes out all plastic like and inorganic
How do you guys paint clothing?


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also this one
I don't even. I just gave up on it entirely because I couldn't figure out how clothes work

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Postby stnkjuc » Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:26 am

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Nice! Here's a video about clothing foldz.

 

Postby Ambiguity » Wed Feb 27, 2013 3:39 am

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The left(his right) nipple on the guy needs to be moved to the left more, right now it looks like it'd be centered on his pectoral which is wrong.

I second that Sinix video, you might have a look at this tutorial as well:
http://darlingmionette.deviantart.com/a ... -176116285

 

Postby Zjacklee » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:56 pm

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Nice! i like what I see here.
All has been said about the clothing tutorial so I won't add anything to that except by telling you to think of clothing as something that has mass and volume of it's own. It wraps around the subject, is pulled or pushed in ways depending on the movement of the subject.

Keep up the good work and i'll be looking forward to your improvement. :)
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Postby Ambiguity » Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:29 am

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Zjacklee wrote:Nice! i like what I see here.
All has been said about the clothing tutorial so I won't add anything...

I was going to say that's one of Zjack's favorite links, but then I was like "oh, he probably doesn't know who that is" lol.

 

Postby Zjacklee » Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:33 pm

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Ambiguity wrote:
Zjacklee wrote:Nice! i like what I see here.
All has been said about the clothing tutorial so I won't add anything...

I was going to say that's one of Zjack's favorite links, but then I was like "oh, he probably doesn't know who that is" lol.


hehe, yea... I'm to blame a bit about it. I haven't been very active lately. I am so busy these days with boring "life" things. Hopefully i'll recover soon.
It's nice to see more people appreciate those little things i've shared too. ^^
Look closely. Can you really See?!

http://zjacklee.deviantart.com/ that's my deviant. ^_^

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Postby marvel57 » Fri Mar 01, 2013 9:11 pm

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From what I see, according to your style-nice btw- the clothes work and they're doing their job :ugeek:


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