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Postby barbuse » Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:14 pm

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Subject title: Help for digital painting

Hey guys, I finaly had some time to work on this illustration ! :D
So here's the new version (I hope we can see some changes... :/ I tried to consider every critiques)
Orc_V9.jpg

And the grayscale version:
Orc_V9_2.jpg

 

Postby barbuse » Wed Feb 06, 2013 4:30 pm

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So what do you think about it ?

 

Postby Zjacklee » Wed Feb 06, 2013 6:10 pm

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I take it as you wouldn't be sure anymore what to add or do from here right?

If I were you, I would check out a few other Orc drawings/paintings which I think look really good and then compare.
Try to see what else to add to make it look like those.
to get the skin texture right, the type of color. Expressions... clothing, accessories.
this is just to expand your view and get a better grasp on the subject and studie it's attributes.

and one more thing... i think the head is not really standing out much from the body. as the values go, it seems as if the head is semi merged in a big mass of body.
Look closely. Can you really See?!

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