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Postby Jeffrey » Sun Feb 03, 2013 11:04 pm

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Subject title: tattoo

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Postby Zjacklee » Sun Feb 03, 2013 11:07 pm

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Maybe you already are going to work further on this since its a WIP.
I feel it's missing a bit of depth on the skin. ( darker shades perhaps? )
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Postby Jeffrey » Wed Feb 13, 2013 12:22 am

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Zjacklee wrote:Maybe you already are going to work further on this since its a WIP.
I feel it's missing a bit of depth on the skin. ( darker shades perhaps? )


yeah thanks! fixed it.

here is an update tell me what you think
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angel2.jpg

 

Postby Total100 » Wed Feb 13, 2013 2:09 am

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wow i must say i really like it! it will look amazing once it is finished. and hope do you plan on having this color in a tatoo? can tattoos do such nice color? doesnt the skin make the color more bland?
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Postby Jeffrey » Wed Feb 13, 2013 4:55 pm

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Total100 wrote:wow i must say i really like it! it will look amazing once it is finished. and hope do you plan on having this color in a tatoo? can tattoos do such nice color? doesnt the skin make the color more bland?


no it will change allot... but i don't know what they can do or not do, so i ignore it.. i only know there is an limit in detail and colors.
the final piece is grey and red, so everything that's red, becomes red.

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Postby Kuronuma » Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:20 pm

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It's real pretty so far :) The only thing is that the area where legs meet the tree seems very creepy to me. I would maybe prefer it if the legs were more brownish, to be closer to the tree colour..
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Postby Jeffrey » Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:23 pm

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Kuronuma wrote:It's real pretty so far :) The only thing is that the area where legs meet the tree seems very creepy to me. I would maybe prefer it if the legs were more brownish, to be closer to the tree colour..


yeah going to do that but painted everything skin color so far :)

 

Postby Kuronuma » Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:38 pm

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Ah, good then! :D
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