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Postby jafaime » Mon Nov 12, 2012 9:20 am

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Subject title: sexy girl

I'm still working on it... idk what to do for the background... any ideas?
sexy girl low.jpg

 

Postby Ambiguity » Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:30 am

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You know I like it, but at the same time I think the proportions are a bit too wacky. I'm guessing you were going for a caricature type look, but something just isn't "working" about it for me. Maybe because you mostly only played with the lower half of the body and left the top half normal?
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Postby Otakatt » Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:05 am

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I think Ambiguity has it right. When I clicked on this, I was like "Oh hey that's nice-" and then I scrolled down and it's like "WHOA WHAT?" It's not bad but the top half and bottom half just don't match up.

I'd suggest exaggerating her top more, or rendering her more 'normally from the waist down depending on what look you're going for. If you do keep the bottom half, I'd also suggest putting something there that she's resting her leg on.

 

Postby marvel57 » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:09 pm

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What did you use for a reference an adult film? Yeah..... kinda creepy :ugeek:

 

Postby jafaime » Mon Nov 12, 2012 6:54 pm

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i used a sketch i made as a reference...
sexy girlref low.jpg

 

Postby marvel57 » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:07 pm

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My bad :oops: btw nice drawing!

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:51 pm

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imo


sexy%20girlref%20low.jpg


if you correct that small space in there, this will turn out a great piece... love the style
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Postby jafaime » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:52 pm

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did u read the first post?

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:54 pm

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was that for me?

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:58 pm

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do you even know what I mean about negative space?

 

Postby Jeffrey » Mon Nov 12, 2012 7:59 pm

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If your meaning is to do it realistic , i would have it done this way.
still might be some mistakes in it :oops:
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Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:06 pm

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no... I don't mean do it realistic. But you deformed that particular spot way to much. It kinda looks inconsistent with the rest of the drawing. Like I said I'm digging the style, in fact it looks awesome. But that spot there captures to much attention.
Don't need to be all worked up about it. It's an opinion, you can do what you want with it... after all this is the critique area...

 

Postby jafaime » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:10 pm

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I get it now... i though u were talking about the negative space (background)... thanks for the critique.... :)

 

Postby Jeffrey » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:12 pm

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jafaime wrote:I get it now... i though u were talking about the negative space (background)... thanks for the critique.... :)


ttssss....... the internet so much miss communication :lol:

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:15 pm

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this
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Postby jafaime » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:17 pm

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yes

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:17 pm

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oh.. ok, didn't see your reply there

the background a rocket can work... or maybe a beast of some kind.
Sexy girls and ugly beast make a cool contrast

 

Postby alnoth » Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:45 pm

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or uhm... another sexy girl? :roll:


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