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Postby Waveloop » Fri Nov 09, 2012 2:40 am

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Subject title: waveloop&Virtueone collab

So here is a new collaboration of myself and Virtueone. We messed up a little with the perspective just for the fun of it... say what you must my friends :|
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Postby Ambiguity » Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:40 am

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I find it odd that she is both soft shaded and cell shaded in places

 

Postby Otakatt » Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:47 am

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Dat waist. So small it doesn't seem very supportive.

It's a pretty neat picture overall though. XD
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Postby marvel57 » Fri Nov 09, 2012 4:17 pm

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Otta-touche' :ugeek: we gave you hell on that night elf :) but both here and on yours!
, they work! Bottom-line

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:20 am

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Ambiguity wrote:I find it odd that she is both soft shaded and cell shaded in places


Yeah I guess that's what you get when two guys with different painting styles work together ... doesn't bother me though

marvel57 wrote:Otta-touche' :ugeek: we gave you hell on that night elf :) but both here and on yours!
, they work! Bottom-line


Your right, this one passed trough a lot of different perspectives so I guess it just accumulated mistakes long the way, we kinda improvised along the way... I would make it differently now that I see the final take. Critiques noticed, and thank you for them


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