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Drawing human head

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 12:09 am
by mirrowdothack
I'm totally new at drawing realism ^^" (usually drawing manga-style^^") and this portrait...kills me ^^"
So I really appreaciat your critiques and help^^ at this piece of work (its a wip, but I think it's best to find the mistakes really quick so thank u so much^^).

Drawing human head

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:12 am
by alnoth
a couple of points that come to mind...

Drawing human head

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:45 am
by Ambiguity
I'm assuming you're using a reference? You probably want to post that if so, because although we can tell you what looks "off", and the general proportions of the human head, we can't tell help you with the proportions of a specific persons head without the ref'.

Drawing human head

PostPosted: Thu Nov 08, 2012 10:48 pm
by marvel57
I agree with ambig about lack of reference for comparison. Also the right cheek may be too dark causing it to recede, making that cheek appear flat or worse, pushed in :shock: but keep working at it :ugeek: