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Postby Otakatt » Mon Nov 05, 2012 2:14 am

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Subject title: Dixileta

When doing sketching for NaNoDraMo I sketched out a friend's character. Figured I could flesh it out to an actual picture, since the picture is based on her CoH incarnation, which is going bye bye shortly.

Reference:http://kylejcrb.deviantart.com/art/CoH-Reference-Sheet-Dixileta-112386038

Think I could probably stand to make her waist thicker than that.
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Postby Otakatt » Mon Nov 05, 2012 4:54 am

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Thinking about adding a second girl to the mix.

ETA: Just gotta pick a pose if I go this route. XD
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Postby Otakatt » Mon Nov 05, 2012 10:05 am

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Fleshed out background girl a little more.
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Postby Fenix_N » Mon Nov 05, 2012 11:40 am

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lol, this totally reminds me of old school anime for some reason.

 

Postby Jeffrey » Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:02 pm

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this is awesome! but i see you make the same mistakes as your previous drawing, you should rly pay attention on the hair.
also your breasts seem a bit weird, or its me.. i don't know, my gf doesn't have big ones xD
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Postby alnoth » Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:09 pm

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to me, this curve looks strange...
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Postby BrandonB » Mon Nov 05, 2012 8:56 pm

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Wow Otakatt, your sketching process looks a lot like mines! Cheers! I love the concept and the girls are going to be beautiful! The only thing I can really say is as Alnoth pointed out, that curve of her rear looks to be a little too far out. Looking great, I can't wait to see the end results of this one! :D

 

Postby Otakatt » Tue Nov 06, 2012 2:27 am

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Fenix_N wrote:lol, this totally reminds me of old school anime for some reason.


Not the first time someone's said something like that to me, though the other time was.. uh.. not said so in a nice way. XD

I appreciate the comments and will fix things accordingly. For now, I'm trying to figure out hands and FFFFFFFFFFFFFF
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Postby alnoth » Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:39 am

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i think youre good enough with the lineart, but what i find that helps me the most in foreshortening is to just go ahead and draw each individual shape completely, never mind what is or isn't visible and then go over it once the shapes are aligned well (like for individual finger bits and such)

 

Postby Ambiguity » Tue Nov 06, 2012 9:22 pm

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Jeffrey wrote:also your breasts seem a bit weird, or its me.. i don't know, my gf doesn't have big ones xD

Maybe on the orange girl, but not on the blue girl imo.


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