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SpiderMan

PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:39 pm
by ferdiman
Please critique. This is my second time drawing on a computer

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:45 pm
by chilingo
The brush Is to soft when you shadowing och lighting this guy. Use less soft brush and it will lok much better

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:39 pm
by ferdiman
Copy that, I only used the airbrush here, but i will try that next time. Thnxs

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 12:31 am
by jimmy_germain
thats really nice ! but the hand holding on to the web looks a little weird

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:27 am
by azkyeh
the left leg (our view, the right leg if your spiderman) is a bit awkward to look at

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:13 am
by Sycra
Because it's only your second time drawing on a computer, I wouldn't really give any critiques. It's just too soon. You need to be doing many drawings. In the beginning you will have a lot of problems, but because you're just starting out, you'll be able to solve these just by doing more drawings. After you have done a lot of drawings on the computer, and you find that you're getting stuck and don't know what to do to improve, that's why you should ask for critiques. But after your second drawing on computer, it's still too soon to be asking for crits.