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Postby alnoth » Tue Oct 30, 2012 9:47 am

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Subject title: Night Elf

are your layers playing tricks on you, or is her eyebrow above her bangs? :shock:

 

Postby Otakatt » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:18 am

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alnoth wrote:are your layers playing tricks on you, or is her eyebrow above her bangs? :shock:


Over parts of her bangs, yeah, since Night Elves have really long eyebrows that don't stay attached close to the skin their entire length: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_dcaRT3FW-e8/T ... t_elf.jpeg

Colored her dress. Going to bed now. :x Will redo background and resume tomorrow hopefully.
Night Elf Lydia2.png

 

Postby alnoth » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:37 am

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i wanna get lost wherever she is ranging the forests...

 

Postby marvel57 » Tue Oct 30, 2012 5:57 pm

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According to the photo, her crotch is Above her hips? Not lkely :!: the thumb on her right hand looks like Mickey mouse's :geek: otherwise very clean work :)
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Postby Otakatt » Tue Oct 30, 2012 10:21 pm

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I'm not sure how I'd go about changing her thumb even if I was going to alter lineart at this point, which I'm not. I did edit the crotch area though so hopefully that looks more on the correct side.

Tried following a tutorial for the gem accessories, but I'm not sure it really matches the style of the rest of the picture. And every time I open MyPaint to work on a background it laaaaaags soooooo muuuuuuch so that's just a no go at this point...
Night Elf Lydia2.png

 

Postby Otakatt » Wed Oct 31, 2012 3:45 am

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Tempted to just call it done. :x
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Postby kocab22 » Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:14 am

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She is too magnificent to be just painting :). Well done.

 

Postby BrandonB » Thu Nov 01, 2012 2:17 am

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Wow this is beautiful. Bravo! Well done man, shes a very pretty night elf too!

 

Postby You » Thu Nov 01, 2012 1:49 pm

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Her pelvis is too short ( on the first pictures,the last 2 seem to have fixed that ) also the fingers on the hand that's not holding the staff are too long (compared to her palm) and the finger between the midle and little finger can't bend like that. The little finger on the other hand looks a bit flat and it's embracing the staff in a weird way as well as the the ring finger which shouldn't be over the middle finger. It's a nice drawing c:
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Postby Waveloop » Thu Nov 01, 2012 2:18 pm

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Looking good Katt... I don´t mind the minor technicalities... it's awesome when you look at it... you need to analyze it very carefully to see those minor defects... so it's really cool for me.

I guess the only thing that bugs me, when I look at it... is that left shoulder... I thing it's just a little to pointy... and it's right were the eyes fall... so it's bugging me a bit... but not enough to bother me 8-)

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