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Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:02 am
by virtueone
This is a recent collaborative effort between me and Waveloop. The initial goal was to create an attractive female character - we ultimately ended up with this gal. Please give us your critiques!

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Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:12 am
by Waveloop
I think it's awesome :D

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:34 am
by alnoth
it might be good, it might not. i cant decide for myself... im talking about the right hand and the fingers. is it ok? is it not?

good stuff overall

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:46 am
by Otakatt
Biggest flaw imo are the hands. Too small and just... kinda wonky. But it's still a pretty piece and I think you guys were successful in what you set out to do.

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:35 am
by Waveloop
yeah the right hand is weird, and the finger length us all wrong... i'll try and patched a bit.

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:48 am
by Ambiguity
Overall not bad, but besides the hands I think there are few other oddities. I think I should be able to see more of her left hip, right now it looks like the back doesn't connect to anything on that side to me. Also, the right arm has some kind of weird transitions in places. Lastly, I don't think the lights on her back would light that much of her back, maybe nothing at all since they are facing away from her body(look at Gears of War pictures).

Anyways, like I said before, it's overall not too shabby. I think the styling of everything is pretty consistent, even the background which is kind of hard to do with comic/cartoon type stuff imo. Overall the lighting is nicely done as well, I like that the brightly lit background is contrasted with the dark foreground, it really highlights the figure's silhouette.

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:16 pm
by Kuukuna
Her head seems to be somewhat awkwardly placed (how her spine bends at her neck) and her ear is too small/too high. You also might want to work on her left elbow a bit, shades/lighting currently make it look too round.
...oh, and her ring could be a bit higher.

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 1:07 pm
by Waveloop
Kuukuna wrote:Her head seems to be somewhat awkwardly placed (how her spine bends at her neck) and her ear is too small/too high. You also might want to work on her left elbow a bit, shades/lighting currently make it look too round.
...oh, and her ring could be a bit higher.


it's just the tip of her hear showing... the elbow does look round thanks for the observation. The position of the head is tilted forward because of her posture and attitude, I think we like it like that.

thanks :)

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 7:48 pm
by virtueone
Good feedback you all! Thanks! Nice work improving my gimp hand Waveloop! I know its not perfect, but this was a cool drawing experience, thanks alot! :D ;)

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:13 pm
by Minako008
I really love her look, her pose and colors! Good job you two! :D

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 8:14 pm
by virtueone
If anyone is interested in seeing the progression of this (or view who did what), go here: http://www.virtueone.com/collab/collab.php?collab_id=1 - it went through about 16 updates. ;)

Princess

PostPosted: Thu Oct 25, 2012 11:57 pm
by marvel57
It,s a good collaberation.But I don't like the lips, they're too heavily outlined, definitely Not luscious,kinda clown-like, and the hands, of course :ugeek:

Princess

PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2012 3:05 am
by Fenix_N
I like the colors and mood it gives. But is it just me or does her eyes seem too far up her face?