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Postby FetusCake » Mon Jan 23, 2012 7:41 pm

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Subject title: Post Apocalyptic Raider Camp [CRITIQUE PLEASE]

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/llamareaper/raider-camp Anything I could possibly improve on? I would greatly appreciate any feedback.

 

Postby Kingw777 » Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:36 am

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It definitely needs more detail I think maybe more debris, broke down cars or something maybe? Its looking like its on a good track but its not really shouting post apocalyptic or even a camp for that matter to me. But its coming along good. Just needs a little more. Great job on it so far.

 

Postby dshylton » Mon Jan 30, 2012 12:13 am

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Probably should add or adjust something to draw interest. Perhaps a focal point, subject or situation because I took a quick glance at the picture and didn't feel like spending much time looking at it. Perhaps a greater contrast of values is needed maybe...I dunno.


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