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Postby Nipponkage » Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:12 pm

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Subject title: Could you please critique my hand?

I was wondering if you could critique this cg drawing.
note: if nothing shows up bellow(I'm new to this forum) the image I'm refering to is here : http://nipponkage.deviantart.com/art/Th ... -332556373

 

Postby alnoth » Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:54 pm

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the DA page was unavailable... just upload the image here to the forum.

 

Postby Nipponkage » Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:58 pm

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alnoth wrote:the DA page was unavailable... just upload the image here to the forum.

yeah, I re-wrote the forum post thingy :arrow:

 

Postby alnoth » Tue Oct 16, 2012 10:34 pm

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well i think the index finger is somehow broken for one thing... and i would work more with the values/shading to better show the form.

 

Postby Otakatt » Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:18 pm

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I think there's way too much going on with the lightning effects. I'd tone that down a bit.

 

Postby Nipponkage » Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:25 pm

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Otakatt wrote:I think there's way too much going on with the lightning effects. I'd tone that down a bit.

When you said that, do you mean reduce the amount of lightning or the amout of space it takes up?

 

Postby Nipponkage » Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:33 pm

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alnoth wrote:well i think the index finger is somehow broken for one thing... and i would work more with the values/shading to better show the form.


Thanks.

 

Postby Nipponkage » Tue Oct 16, 2012 11:33 pm

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alnoth wrote:well i think the index finger is somehow broken for one thing... and i would work more with the values/shading to better show the form.

thanks although, would you say this ones values are better?
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Postby Otakatt » Wed Oct 17, 2012 4:47 am

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Nipponkage wrote:
Otakatt wrote:I think there's way too much going on with the lightning effects. I'd tone that down a bit.

When you said that, do you mean reduce the amount of lightning or the amout of space it takes up?


The space it takes up.

 

Postby alnoth » Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:42 am

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i would think, at this level, get the linework right first. worry about colors later. and worry about special lighting effects like electric zapps way later.


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