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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2012 6:59 pm
by jafaime
photoshop + wacom intuos 3 + :)

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:30 pm
by Fenix_N
As always, very nice drawing. But that mouth looks too low on the face.

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:02 pm
by Waveloop
I like it like that, gives him a more intense and serious look... Awesome job

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:15 am
by Ambiguity
I think the mouth being not even just that low on the face but that tiny makes this seem cartoony. This is otherwise really cool, I dig all the texture here.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:52 am
by Meteorman05
Looks awesome. I would say, though, that it looks like his shoulders are non-existent. But otherwise, really cool. Great detail.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:58 am
by Otakatt
Love the detail here, but I agree with the others about the mouth. I warped it a little to make the lips a little bigger and moved the mouth up and I think it makes his expression seem more serious.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:07 am
by jafaime
haha... thanks! nice critiques guys! but I like the mouth just like it is... and yes, it need shoulders :)

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2012 12:10 am
by leaosenz
nice character, for me i have no problem with mouth placement, i would say to myself maybe some alien race the mouth is low.. only for me, sometimes we only need the light and shadow to explain the shapes, not too much lines..
here i tried to show my point on his mouth
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 14, 2012 2:57 am
by jafaime
good critique, I like that! its kinda hard for me to pick a style cause I've been drawing almost all my life, and i just learn how to paint 1 year ago... sometimes gets hard to let go the lines.