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Postby jafaime » Wed Oct 10, 2012 6:59 pm

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Subject title: for critique :)

photoshop + wacom intuos 3 + :)
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Postby Fenix_N » Wed Oct 10, 2012 7:30 pm

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As always, very nice drawing. But that mouth looks too low on the face.

 

Postby Waveloop » Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:02 pm

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I like it like that, gives him a more intense and serious look... Awesome job

 

Postby Ambiguity » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:15 am

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I think the mouth being not even just that low on the face but that tiny makes this seem cartoony. This is otherwise really cool, I dig all the texture here.

 

Postby Meteorman05 » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:52 am

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Looks awesome. I would say, though, that it looks like his shoulders are non-existent. But otherwise, really cool. Great detail.

 

Postby Otakatt » Thu Oct 11, 2012 2:58 am

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Love the detail here, but I agree with the others about the mouth. I warped it a little to make the lips a little bigger and moved the mouth up and I think it makes his expression seem more serious.
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Postby jafaime » Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:07 am

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haha... thanks! nice critiques guys! but I like the mouth just like it is... and yes, it need shoulders :)

 

Postby leaosenz » Sun Oct 14, 2012 12:10 am

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nice character, for me i have no problem with mouth placement, i would say to myself maybe some alien race the mouth is low.. only for me, sometimes we only need the light and shadow to explain the shapes, not too much lines..
here i tried to show my point on his mouth
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Postby jafaime » Sun Oct 14, 2012 2:57 am

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good critique, I like that! its kinda hard for me to pick a style cause I've been drawing almost all my life, and i just learn how to paint 1 year ago... sometimes gets hard to let go the lines.


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