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Critique this please

PostPosted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 9:43 pm
by timesdivide
you can use this for a video critique.

This is a piece I just finished-"the rats, the hoods and the poor".
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Critique this please

PostPosted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 10:43 pm
by Stoyben
This is a great picture although, there are some adjustments you can make. The guy in the middles eye is a little lower than 1/2 way. Also he has a black line around his eye and his mouth I don't know if this was intentional or not. The guy on the lefts eye is a little big, I'm not trying to be mean I'm just giving some constructive criticism.

Critique this please

PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 4:17 am
by Roger
So.... What exactly do you want critiqued? By the way, try learning a bit about proportions it'll help out in the long run.

Critique this please

PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:51 pm
by timesdivide
Hey stoyben, thanks for the advice, the line around the eyes and mouth is a mask, i guess i didnt make that clear enough.
you are right about the eyes though, thanks, i might revisit this and fix the left guys eye.