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Postby davidbus » Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:00 pm

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Subject title: first timer

I'm new here,and after watching other users,and their work,i've decided to start darwing for the first time in my life.
Here are a few things that i have been working on,after watching Mark Crilley on his youtube Chanel.
4 weeks ago...
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2 weeks ago...

After watching WayneTully1's on youtube,a week ago....
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Today....
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Made with ball pen black/blue.

 

Postby marvel57 » Tue Aug 28, 2012 4:59 pm

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Hey man 8-) you got some basic skills.Some of your work is decent, reminds me of myself in school. Do you have a favorite artist? If so ,try to find someone (besides me lol) who you'd like to be able to draw like,and study their work. Go online and watch Sycra drawing basics then go to library or amazon and buy a good book, maybe how to draw comics the marvel way and work like that. Good luck and keep going. PS checkout my sketch book

 

Postby davidbus » Sun Sep 02, 2012 8:01 am

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My best one,yet.I hope is not to much explicit .
Spoiler: show
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I've used this image as a guide.
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Watching Paolomorrone on youtube
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For this 2,i used Google image database :
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phpJdlT3TAM.jpg

 

Postby davidbus » Fri Sep 07, 2012 4:57 pm

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Just finished those:
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Working on this,
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I'm stuck ,because i don't like drawing hands,any advice?

 

Postby marvel57 » Fri Sep 07, 2012 8:22 pm

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Yeah-draw hands if you got the cash buy an old Famous Artists School course on amazon or abe.com I got two, one painting and one commercial art and illustration $70_45,respectively . 24 lessons 4 huge binders. I thinks it better than a dozen seperate books I've owned check it ;)

 

Postby Ambiguity » Fri Sep 07, 2012 8:57 pm

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davidbus wrote:I'm stuck ,because i don't like drawing hands,any advice?

Reference your own hands, it helps if you have a mirror(you could probably use a CD instead).

 

Postby Fenix_N » Sat Sep 08, 2012 1:22 am

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Hey man, maybe you should start a sketchbook to display your artwork. When you post so many images at a time in a critique thread, it makes it difficult to critique them. If you just post one image at a time in the critique section, you'll more likely to get a critique.

 

Postby davidbus » Sat Sep 08, 2012 12:28 pm

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Thanks a lot for the advice,and the nice words,that means much to a ,first timer in this field.Thanks a lot.

 

Postby davidbus » Sun Sep 16, 2012 3:17 pm

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an eye muncher
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eyes close up

 

Postby davidbus » Fri Sep 21, 2012 3:45 pm

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today:

 

Postby davidbus » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:11 pm

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trying new things:
07102012(012).jpg
07102012(013).jpg
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those are done in color pencils

 

Postby marvel57 » Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:24 pm

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You've got a very steady hand! A lot of these look like tattoo art, keep on truckin' :ugeek:

 

Postby davidbus » Mon Oct 22, 2012 4:07 pm

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somethings from 27 08 2012>
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both are done in blue ballpoint pen

 

Postby davidbus » Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:31 pm

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my best one

 

Postby fdm » Sat Nov 03, 2012 11:53 am

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hmmm,
i checked your account and it seem you are only posting here,
wouldn't it make more sense to make a sketchbook and post all your drawings there,
and only the ones you want critique on here?


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