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Postby 7Silver » Tue Jan 03, 2012 8:47 pm

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Subject title: Skull Study

Hello. I would like to know the flaws of this. don't hold back. Video critic is welcome too.
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Postby Matej » Wed Jan 04, 2012 1:25 pm

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Looks great, but something at the left side of teeth is off.

 

Postby Sycra » Wed Jan 04, 2012 4:35 pm

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Overall I think you've done a really nice job. What stands out to me though is the contour of the nose and mouth. I added some red lines with arrows to show what I mean. I think adjusting the contour will make the skull look more 3 dimensional and fix some of the 'weirdness' with the teeth.


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