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Postby hayato-s » Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:42 pm

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Subject title: A concept for a character.

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I drew this about two months ago and I worked on it for quite some time. I feel it's not finished and something seems really off. The problem is, I can't really fix it. I would really appreciate a critique on this drawing because it is my first serious concept art-ish experiment.
Here's a link for the full resolution I've worked on: http://hayato-s.deviantart.com/#/d4ecyb4

You can use this for a video critique! I'd be more than happy to see one.
Last edited by hayato-s on Fri Jan 13, 2012 7:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.

 

Postby bharatkumargupta » Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:47 pm

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awesome

 

Postby Kingw777 » Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:54 pm

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I would suggest tightening up the lines and possibly blending the colors more. And less arrow in chesty. Jk lol but good work looks great.

 

Postby Matej » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:20 pm

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His face texture looks like its made out of wood

 

Postby Kingw777 » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:40 pm

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Yeah you really gotta smooth out the texture. I think this one would make a great video critique.

 

Postby plixik » Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:48 am

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I attempted a few quick fixes.

His skin was kinda green and lifeless so I threw some red in there. I realize he's dying but he's still alive.
The whole thing is pretty muddy overall. I would just work on you blending and values. Do value studies.
My other points are on the image.

I didn't intend to, but I seem to have made him more sad :P

defeated_wip.jpg

 

Postby hayato-s » Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:58 am

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Thank you all for the comments! Pixlix, I like what you've done to the drawing! I'll try to work on it a bit more, even redo it if I have the time. I totally agree that my values are off and the colors are muddy. I always try to get away from too saturated colors and my colors always end up dead and unvaried. Thank you! I'm looking forward to more critiques. (-:

 

Postby Zargogo » Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:18 am

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The left hand is too large in regards to perspective, I think.


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