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Postby ColonelHacker12 » Sun Oct 28, 2018 12:58 am

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Subject title: Digital Drawing Of Woman.

What do you think of this digital drawing (done with ArtRage) and is a copy of the ill fated sex worker from 1998's Very Bad Things:

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What do you think?
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Postby bosinpai » Thu Nov 01, 2018 4:20 pm

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Hi,

Her jaw looks quite short.
Can you post the reference / stillshot of Kobe Tai that you used?

 

Postby ColonelHacker12 » Tue Nov 13, 2018 2:10 am

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Thanks for the feedback; I will post a snapshot in the next couple of days.
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Postby ColonelHacker12 » Wed Nov 14, 2018 4:05 pm

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Here you go:

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Wow, I can see the errors in my quick study now sticking out at me, even if I was initially quite pleased with it.

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Postby Ambiguity » Sun Nov 18, 2018 2:46 pm

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You should try fixing those errors you see. Also, not sure what type of brushes ArtRage has, but I'd paint with the simplest brush its got for a good while, make sure it's something you have no problem getting large areas of flat tone with. The one you're using looks like it auto-smudges, if that's the case it's probably gonna take you extra time to get used to not "infecting" your value groups with it. You don't want to be learning your tools at the same time you're learning to draw, it just leads to more frustration.

 

Postby Gryephon » Thu Nov 22, 2018 6:44 pm

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I don't think you would see that much of a denture on the cheek. Also, some of the edges look kind of jagged, you might want to refine the shapes through a lasso tool.
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