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Postby curvy-oriented » Wed Aug 22, 2018 8:31 am

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Subject title: Critique this :D

i tried to ask on DA but no response, i hope i get some finger pointing to my error here so i can improve in a efficient way. Thanks before :)
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Postby Audiazif » Sun Aug 26, 2018 9:46 pm

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I think it is hard to point at anything in particular because these drawings are so loose and sketchy. That might be why you didn't get a response. Maybe what you could improve on is cleaning things up. If I had to point out anything it would be the arms and legs. The lengths seem off on some and some joints look "broken", but they are sketchy so the next steps in the drawing process would probably fix these issues.
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