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Bi-yearly "I cant figure out whats off with my art" post

PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2018 3:07 am
by ShyVibrance
I'd like some critiques on some of my artwork! I feel like I especially struggle with faces, but honestly feel free to critique me on anything you think I'm doing wrong. Thanks for reading.

Bi-yearly "I cant figure out whats off with my art" post

PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2018 8:21 am
by Gryephon
Shading style seems closer to color flats. Are these pieces finished?

Bi-yearly "I cant figure out whats off with my art" post

PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2018 12:28 am
by Snakebreath
I think studying line weight and really pushing those thicker lines could help make the forms pop a lot better. Especially with the subtle shading.

Bi-yearly "I cant figure out whats off with my art" post

PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2018 12:52 am
by Snakebreath
Here's an example, I did a quick drawover. All I did was darken/thicken a couple lines to make some areas pop. It helps a lot to push the depth in your image without the need for shading.