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Bubble Trigger Dames !

PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2018 1:32 am
by SlimRock
Sup guys, been a while. Here are some characters I was just having fun painting in Photoshop thought I could share :D .
You can check out a higher rez version on my Artstation : https://www.artstation.com/muk1r1

Bubble Trigger Dames !

PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2018 4:33 pm
by Alluffer
Nice concepts! Design vise I wouldn't change much. Maybe because this seems to be a "Bubbly", colorful, sexy game I would brighten up the colors in the clothes, to make them pop.
I have a bit more to say about the overall presentation. The dark bars on the sides are distracting and serve no purpose, so I would get rid of them. I would also give the characters more space. Now they are cramped up to this small space and with the title overlapping with the bunny ears, it doesn't look that good. Also the dark shadows underneath each girl is distracting and unnecessary. You could also tone down the background gradient.

Here is a quick over paint:

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Other than that, really cool designs and poses! :D

Bubble Trigger Dames !

PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2018 7:32 am
by SlimRock
Thanks for the feedback mate
Alluffer wrote:Nice concepts! Design vise I wouldn't change much. Maybe because this seems to be a "Bubbly", colorful, sexy game I would brighten up the colors in the clothes, to make them pop.
I have a bit more to say about the overall presentation. The dark bars on the sides are distracting and serve no purpose, so I would get rid of them. I would also give the characters more space. Now they are cramped up to this small space and with the title overlapping with the bunny ears, it doesn't look that good.

Other than that, really cool designs and poses! :D

Ill see to such presentations going forward.