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Postby TheMiziko » Sun Jun 03, 2018 10:33 am

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Subject title: Looking for beedback onmy i

Hello guys ! I need some critique on my WIP illustration
I'm looking for lots of constructive feedback on what to improve before adding any more unnecessary details !
Giants_united_WIP_v2.png

 

Postby Plumbum » Mon Jun 04, 2018 6:08 am

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I have one question: what kind of perspective are you using? It seems like you were trying some sort of wide eye perspective, but it doesn't seem to be quite working. The building on the left should have its lines bending to show distortion. Currently, it just looks like the building is about to fall over itself. You did bend the lines on the structure to the left, but to my limited knowledge, it should bend the other direction.

Otherwise, I think your painting look fantastic! Really like the storytelling.
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