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Horrible Boss

PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2018 12:09 am
by ColonelHacker12
Done on Clip Studio Paint and scanned in pencil drawing:

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Feedback will be welcome.

Horrible Boss

PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:20 am
by ColonelHacker12
I guess I have to work over it again to get constructive criticism?

Horrible Boss

PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 2:40 am
by Ambiguity
Is she yelling at the dude behind her or someone off camera? If the former, why is she looking off camera instead of at him? Also, what were you going for stylistically? I see you started to texture the hair and paint the tie, but everything else about this says you wanted that clean anime look.

There are some drawing stuff that would need to be fixed if you went forward with what you've got, but I really think you need to decide on what the story is, and if this is really the best comp to tell it, and also what you want this to look like visually/stylistically, maybe pull in some references from other artists to help keep you on track.

Horrible Boss

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2018 6:58 pm
by ColonelHacker12
Thanks for the feedback.