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Postby ColonelHacker12 » Fri Jun 01, 2018 12:09 am

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Subject title: Horrible Boss

Done on Clip Studio Paint and scanned in pencil drawing:

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Feedback will be welcome.
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Postby ColonelHacker12 » Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:20 am

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I guess I have to work over it again to get constructive criticism?
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Postby Ambiguity » Thu Jun 21, 2018 2:40 am

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Is she yelling at the dude behind her or someone off camera? If the former, why is she looking off camera instead of at him? Also, what were you going for stylistically? I see you started to texture the hair and paint the tie, but everything else about this says you wanted that clean anime look.

There are some drawing stuff that would need to be fixed if you went forward with what you've got, but I really think you need to decide on what the story is, and if this is really the best comp to tell it, and also what you want this to look like visually/stylistically, maybe pull in some references from other artists to help keep you on track.

 

Postby ColonelHacker12 » Sun Jul 08, 2018 6:58 pm

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Thanks for the feedback.
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