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Postby seriveena » Tue May 29, 2018 4:19 pm

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Subject title: critique pls??

i would fricking love some critiques

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Postby Josephcow » Thu May 31, 2018 8:18 pm

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Your drawing is really nice! I especially like the last piece.

I see a little bit of a problem with your rendering technique. You tend to use the soft brush quite a lot. The soft brush, or airbrush is very useful, but if you shade with it a lot your shadows can end up being shapeless and out of place.

The shadow underneath the white hair on the first character pops the hair forward and makes it look like it's in front of the forehead instead of attached to it. So my overall critique is do more practice with lighting and using shadows. Try to define the shape of the shadows cleanly before you soften the edge, this puts you in control of what you're doing.


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