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Postby FeatherBow » Sat Apr 21, 2018 8:20 pm

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Subject title: Lighting and anatomy

I'm study lighting right now, need some critique. If you see mistakes in anatomy, let me know too, please. Thank you

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Postby Alluffer » Wed Apr 25, 2018 7:34 pm

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By quick glance I can't see any major problems with the anatomy but the lighting could use some tweaking.

The lighting is inconsistent. If the light is coming in front of the character her back and the back of her legs should be completely in shadow, same for the creature on her back.

Made the pose quickly in portrait studio so you can get and idea what I mean. It's not perfect by any means but still :D

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