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Postby twinpeaks » Fri Mar 02, 2018 2:04 pm

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Subject title: what do you guys think?


 

Postby Dinhosaur » Sun Mar 04, 2018 5:46 pm

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Looks cool so far. I would definitely apply a much darker background to emphasise the flame luminosity. This is most likely WIP but I would add more interesting elements to her outfit like buttons, buckles, padding etc.

Hope this helps and keep up the good work!
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Postby DrawingGuy31 » Fri Mar 16, 2018 8:48 am

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Like Dinh said, a darker background would drastically improve this. Also, darkening all colors on this piece save the fire, and anything lit by it. It'd create a much more dramatic piece.


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