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Girl holding a monster head.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2018 11:58 pm
by godsi
(Sorry couldn't think of a proper title, lol.)
I would like a general critique of my painting. I have it side by side, without the filter and with the filter. It's finished so I may not make any revisions, but I would like to know if there are any mistakes before I start another one. Thank you!
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Girl holding a monster head.

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2018 6:07 pm
by Spider
I think the filter on the second one could be toned down a little bit, because it feels like the lighting on the second one, particularly in the hair and legs just draws a lot of attention away from the face.
I like to darken the surroundings of the character and lighten the face, or areas where I'm trying to draw attention.

The head and the head of the monster seem a little unaligned, but that might be intentional
I really like the design of the monster head though, very nice vibrant colors. :D

Girl holding a monster head.

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2018 6:20 am
by godsi
Spider wrote:I think the filter on the second one could be toned down a little bit, because it feels like the lighting on the second one, particularly in the hair and legs just draws a lot of attention away from the face.
I like to darken the surroundings of the character and lighten the face, or areas where I'm trying to draw attention.

The head and the head of the monster seem a little unaligned, but that might be intentional
I really like the design of the monster head though, very nice vibrant colors. :D


Thank you so much for your response!