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by Alluffer » Thu Feb 01, 2018 7:11 am
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AllufferPosts: 62Joined: Fri Dec 11, 2015 3:26 pm
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I think you're using too many values in a single spot and the round brushstroke marks make the painting look spotty. Try to think about the planes of the face when deciding what value to use on a spot.
Also now there is no defined edges, so for example the eyes blend in with the rest of the image even though it's supposed to be a focal point. There is also some unnecessary light on the left side of the face.
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