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Postby Kavilen » Wed Jan 17, 2018 3:36 am

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Subject title: Chibi me...

I drew a chibi version of me, but I really can't tell what looks wrong on him. I feel that something is off, I just can't see it. Anybody that can help me, please?
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Postby snisetski » Thu Jan 18, 2018 8:02 am

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This looks cute! I really can't judge the proportions because this is a chibi and is very stylized. However, I think that his shirt beneath the jacket and its folds look too stiff. His ear could use a better shape and some better curves, it kind of looks like a belly button to me haha :)

 

Postby Kavilen » Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:04 am

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XD I now cant stop seeing his belly button ear. I can also see what you mean about the shirt and I'll be sure to change both. Thank you for the reply! :D


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