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Postby Sarathi » Tue Jan 09, 2018 7:39 am

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Subject title: Character_Practice

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Postby Audiazif » Tue Jan 09, 2018 3:43 pm

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This is pretty good but one thing that really makes it fall short is the presence of visual tangents, there are several. Many of them are around the placement of the sword and knife but there is at least one concerning only the figure. You could probably get away with a few tangents if they are not that distracting so in the future be aware of them but don't make them a priority. Maybe go through and check before doing and while you are doing final lines.
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Postby Sarathi » Fri Jan 12, 2018 5:55 am

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Thanks a lot. It's a goooood advice. I didn't even think of tangents..


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