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Need Critique for this forest painting

PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2018 8:00 am
by mewtiful
Hello
I'm trying to improve at drawing characters in environments, and I would really appreciate any critique on this piece of mine.
Thank you!
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Need Critique for this forest painting

PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2018 10:04 am
by MiguelRuivo
Hi madeleine! I like your colors :)

Well for improvements maybe i would suggest (inside the framing you did) not putting everything with the same strenght. This means whenever you squint your eyes at the piece there's no definitive focal point. You can work that with colors, textures, values or even saturation. Also the edges seem to be a little brushy so if you could tight the edges a little bit it would help to inform the materials and how the light affects on them.

Hope this helps,

Cheers!