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Postby TGU » Wed Jan 03, 2018 2:15 pm

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Subject title: Need critique, thanks

Been trying some figure drawing. I feel that they're okay but at the same time they all feel "off" or stiff. Any critique?
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Postby MiguelRuivo » Thu Jan 04, 2018 9:59 am

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Hi there,

Welcome to the forums!

Well they do look a little stiff but that gets resolved with some fast gesture drawings (from 30s to 1 minute). How much time did you spend on this? Also studying a little the human body can give you more pointers on how or what you are drawing. Hope this helps, cheers :D

 

Postby fi_le » Fri Jan 05, 2018 2:00 pm

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Hey, umm, sorry not to give you a critique, but it would be nice if you gave that a NSFW tag. You don't have to, since it falls under "artistic" nudity, but it would be cool.

Other than that, keep drawing these :)
...you see, it's supposed to be fi_le like the file from the computer... the one where you put the data things in.

my sketchbook on here and my Instagram

 

Postby TGU » Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:42 pm

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Ye, my bad. Will think of that next time I post.


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