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Postby Cucumbre » Fri Dec 22, 2017 3:21 am

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Subject title: Secret Santa Gift MLP TIME SENSITIVE

so i'm working on a secret santa gift and I need help with lighting/composition. I want to fit a Santa sort of pony in the background sneaking toward the tree to put presents under it without alerting the pony making cocoa. Any suggestions on how to rearrange the composition to suit this?
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Also if you have any ideas on how to make the background feel more likea house thats lived in, hit me! Any and all suggestions are welcome

 

Postby warm-wax » Sat Dec 23, 2017 7:43 pm

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hi hope this makes sense and isn't too late for your secret santa. that pink dog is supposed to be a santa horse. BAsically, swap the fridge and the christmas tree. some more light on the christmas tree would be good, perhaps some shiny ornaments. I would just improve the overall contrast.

The sketch looks good tho. merr christmas


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