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Postby he_creat » Tue Jan 14, 2020 2:00 pm

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Subject title: hi im Tima I'm 16

pls can comment give feedback thx

 

Postby Belu » Fri Jan 24, 2020 4:22 pm

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Dude can you upload something to critique first..

 

Postby he_creat » Sat Feb 08, 2020 10:06 am

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sorry sorry
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Postby he_creat » Sat Feb 08, 2020 10:11 am

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sorry sorry

 

Postby fi_le » Mon Feb 10, 2020 11:14 am

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There we go, welcome to the forums!

As with all folks, we'd be much better off knowing what your goal is with drawing. From the single image I'm guessing you like to do fashion and or characters, hm?
Well, you're on a great path for all I can tell. The most important part of drawing at the stage we're at is showing form and that seems to be starting to work already. My favourite part of your drawings is the tip of the shoes on the right, you really nailed those.

In contrast, there are still a lot of places where you didn't think about your lines carefully, like on the shoe on the very left. I think you can see for yourself how there really isn't gesture or form, just a super vague indication of "shoe goes here".

Bonus points for the jacket, that looks pretty solid.
Keep practicing!
...you see, it's supposed to be fi_le like the file from the computer... the one where you put the data things in.

my sketchbook on here and my Instagram


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