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Postby zaclu » Thu Feb 07, 2019 8:45 am

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Subject title: Cloth help

I'm having trouble with cloth simulation, particularly the right arm. I'm going for a thick cape, right hand holding the carbine in a relaxed pose but I have no idea what exactly looks off.
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Postby the8utcher » Sun Feb 10, 2019 7:59 am

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Hello zaclu, I think you should have your character hold the gun within the cape, seeing the gun poke out from behind makes it look off to me.
I don't know if this is helpful cause I don't usually critique art.


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