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Postby chowderheadz » Sat Mar 18, 2017 5:08 pm

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Subject title: "Mr. Hide"

Been struggling with this one a bit. Thoughts?
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Postby Fantelle » Sun Mar 19, 2017 8:48 am

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    I like the intimate atmosphere a lot!

    The biggest problem I'm experiencing viewing this piece is my eye falling off the canvas at the bottom right corner.
    A possible fix could be upping the contrast and saturation around the area of focus (the face):

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    Sycra made a video on the subject if you're not quite sure what I'm talking about: https://youtu.be/uOZF5Lmf7F8

 

Postby Cucumbre » Tue Mar 21, 2017 12:16 am

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https://youtu.be/aD58ig8FYfY
Hey there! I did a video critique on your piece!

 

Postby chowderheadz » Tue Mar 21, 2017 4:50 am

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Thanks! Helpful stuff guys


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